oh my god
its good. a little long winded but well composed and itresting. keep it up miz
hey for your first, you got the idea. it needs more 'guts' tho, more melodies, mix it up more, you know? other than that, keep goin! you might want to check my stuff out, i just started too, but im getting better. remembre, im talking off of what i think, not experience
Hey, thanks a lot! I'll keep in mind what you said, thanks. ^_^
the guitar work is good, it needs a little better tonal matching, but keep going!
you seem like you know timing well enough, you can do better
Of course I can. I'm just a lazy motherfucker.
creepy, but i like the guitar work. keep on truckin!
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