Awesome indeed

theres deep lacerations in his sternum WHERE ALIENS HAVE TAKEN OVER HIS BODY!!!!!! AAAAAWWWWWHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTT?!?!
?!?!?! lol best part

thang god for good sequels!

there are literally tears in my eyes right now, great stuff!

nice

its good. a little long winded but well composed and itresting. keep it up miz

not bad

hey for your first, you got the idea. it needs more 'guts' tho, more melodies, mix it up more, you know? other than that, keep goin! you might want to check my stuff out, i just started too, but im getting better. remembre, im talking off of what i think, not experience